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Post by blackburn on Apr 19, 2007 16:26:13 GMT -5
maria tightened her grip around jai's waist slightly. she wondered what it would be. she closed her eyes and let the sun shine on her face.
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Post by shadz on Apr 20, 2007 7:01:13 GMT -5
Jai held on to Jupiter and frowned as he started struggling, he turned his head around the worry noticable How ya doing back there? he held on to Jupiters mane.
Jupiter extended his stride and started to really puff, being bareback Jai and Maria could feel him gasping for air but still moved up the steep hill. Jupiter stumbled a little causing him to go down onto his rump almost falling over but regaining his balance just in time.
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Post by Spooky on Apr 21, 2007 10:28:32 GMT -5
alan heard the horse gasping for air,he wondered who it could be,but then realized whos land he was on.jai's!(he thought)he figured that there were 2 people seemings how jupitor who he knew jai was on never gasped going up hills.he listened...................nothing"jai,jai where are you"alan called
ooc im sorry shadz yor just such a great writer,ilove writing the posts with you
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Post by blackburn on Apr 21, 2007 10:45:11 GMT -5
maria almost lost balance and fallen off the horse. but luckily jupiter had gotten his balance back. then she heard a voice. she looked around wondering who it was.
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Post by Spooky on Apr 21, 2007 10:49:20 GMT -5
"jai jai,stop being stubborn where are you ,i want to meet your girl freind"alan said grinning
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Post by blackburn on Apr 21, 2007 10:52:18 GMT -5
maria rolled her eyes. it was the fact that some person was out there calling jai's name that bothered her. but she didnt mind being called his girlfriend.
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Post by Spooky on Apr 21, 2007 11:04:35 GMT -5
then alan spotted a flash of something,tail maybe?he squeased chicks flanks,ecparently to hard,she darted off,"uhoh"alan said as he tumbled down into the rocks,"and i just had to say hi to the best/only freind i have"alan said just as a sharp object peirced his side"jai jupiter"alan yelled,knowing no one was around for miles.alan started to close his eyes.silence.,except for the whinneys and shrieks of a horse.alan relized how much danger he was in,and that his horse didnt know what to do on moutains without his guidence"chick"he managed to say "chick,save chick first"he yelled as loudly as he could
hey blackburn yor writingg is good(did you know im caspers sister in real life,cool huh/////to shadz i cant believe that you want to sell jupitor id love to have him if yor thinking bout it,if not thats fine to
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Post by blackburn on Apr 21, 2007 15:22:01 GMT -5
(thanks! ;D o and i was gonna buy jupiter too if jai sold him)
maria saw what happened. she got jai to stop. she dismounted and got chick to settle down. once she was settled down maria walked her over to alan. [glow=red,2,300]you ok?[/glow]
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Post by shadz on Apr 22, 2007 6:34:44 GMT -5
Jupiter tried to stand on the steep hill Maria i cant hold Jupiter here Jai pleaded Maria, then watched her help Alan. Jai started turning Jupiter around but Jupiter stood on a loose stone falling on hi side and jai leg, Jupiter rolled over his back with Jai still there and Jai and jupiter tumbled down the hill the whole time Jupiter trying to get up, Jupiter just kept tumbling eih Jai underneath him. Before Jai fell unconsious he yelled to Maria Keep the horse calm. and watch out fo other things like wild horses.
{thanks spooky, im glad you like my writing...and i havent decided if im going to sell him yet}
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Post by blackburn on Apr 22, 2007 10:03:40 GMT -5
maria gasped. she wanted to help but knew she couldnt. she managed to keep chick settled. she helped alan up. [glow=red,2,300]is chick ok on the moutain? i mean can she stay balanced and everything?[/glow] maria looked at alan then at chick then at jai and jupiter.
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Post by shadz on Apr 22, 2007 10:15:16 GMT -5
Jupiter stopp himself from tumbling halfway down the hill, he lay with his head twisted in an awkward way. the reigns had caught onto a brach and soon as the reigns or branch broke Jupiter would start to tumble again, Jai's leg was underneath Jupiter and he lay limp, from a distance Jai looked deadbut was only unconsious. Jupiter whinnied he couldnt feel Jai's breathing anymore, he desperately tried to turn his head but moving caused pain to shoot up his front leg that had a stick peirced through.
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Post by blackburn on Apr 22, 2007 11:40:55 GMT -5
maria mounted chick. she managed to get to where jai and jupiter where with only a few minor problems. maria dismounted chick. she tied the reins to a branch and went to jai and jupiter. she sighed in a sad way then went to jupiter. maria managed to get him up. she saw his leg and sighed, sadly, again. making sure jupiter could stay up and balanced maria went to jai. she grabbed him and finally managed to get him onto chick's back. [glow=red,2,300]chick...you gotta stay strong...[/glow] maria looked at the ground then went to jupiter. she didnt know what to do for him. she hugged him then said [glow=red,2,300]i will be back in a few minuted for you boy! dont worry![/glow] maria led chick up the mountain side, with jai on her back, to where alan was. [glow=red,2,300]ok i need help! we need to get jai somewhere and jupiter needs help![/glow]
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Post by Spooky on Apr 22, 2007 13:44:39 GMT -5
"hello,my side is throbing,but i'm older than yall,ill take chick and jai down and you stay hear,ill be back"alan said in pain
ok to both youl
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Post by blackburn on Apr 22, 2007 17:41:07 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]ok...[/glow]maria said, looking at the ground. she hoped she could go with jai but it didnt matter. now she just had to figure out how to help the horse. maria walked to jupiter still looking at the ground. jai would probably hate her if she let anything happen to his horse. she grabbed the reins. she looked at jupiter and said [glow=red,2,300]dont worry. i know this will hurt but i can only heal this wound if i take the stick out of your leg...[/glow] maria sighed and then bent down next the jupiter. she managed to grabbed some stuff she had. so she sighed once more then grabbed the stick. she didnt want to do it but she pulled the stick out of jupiter's leg. then she got some ________(dont no wat to put there..sry) and cleaned up the wound. then she put some ointment and a bandage on it. after doing what she could...maria grabbed the reins and slowly started to lead jupiter down the mountain. she stopped every so often to let jupiter rest.
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Post by Spooky on Apr 22, 2007 21:40:22 GMT -5
alan had started to come back up the hill"get up on her"alan demanded"now"he said loudly"your botfriend is fine,give me the reins"alan said."i still have a chunk of rock in me hurry",alan cried out in pain
just to let yal know alans name is pronounced with both a's being short
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